Maybe try it at a different angle and have the light more on it . I dont quite understand what your trying to tell by this piece . The black spot closer to the top of the Moon is kind of confusing me . I like your technique on it but i feel it could be better with a use of more light . Overall I like the idea and the technique . Just work on the impact of the piece and how others will view it . Im just a little unsure of what message your trying to put across by it . It will be terrific just keep working on it
* ¡Fantástico trabajo! Lo hemos destacado dentro de la carpeta "Featured nº 4 o Destacados nº 4" en Special-Groups. (Es la carpeta donde se exhiben los mejores trabajos del grupo). ¡Por favor, queremos ver más trabajos tuyos en el grupo!
* Fantastic work! Featured in Special-Groups in folder Featured nº 4. (Best works of the group). Please, We want to see more works in the group of you!
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